On the 24 of june it was fale launch we were singing songs marching and the fales names where kauri,
Rata, kowhai and totara. The group I am in is kauri i think kauri is in second place we were at last place but now we improved a lot from the past two weeks.First Rata second Kauri third Kowhai in last place totara.
Hello, Ahmed. I like how you told us what fale you are in and how you told which fale was coming first and last This reminded me of when soldiers are marching on the marching court. Maybe next time you could tell us how many points your fale got, or your chant that you sang during the march. What made you want to write a blog post about this? How much did you enjoy it?
Greetings Ahmed! I love how you used your descriptive words they amazed me a lot! You reminded me of when i was singing next to you! Maybe check your spelling and grammar. That's Zayd signing off.
I thought that was a good recount of the fale launch, you had information about what we did and who was in involved as well as when it was. I took me back to marching around area 1 chanting really loud.. Remember that names have capital letters; so Kauri, Kowhai, Rata and Totara would as they are names of our fales. Keep up the blogging :)
Hello, Ahmed.
ReplyDeleteI like how you told us what fale you are in and how you told which fale was coming first and last
This reminded me of when soldiers are marching on the marching court.
Maybe next time you could tell us how many points your fale got, or your chant that you sang during the march.
What made you want to write a blog post about this? How much did you enjoy it?
Greetings Ahmed! I love how you used your descriptive words they amazed me a lot!
ReplyDeleteYou reminded me of when i was singing next to you! Maybe check your spelling and grammar. That's Zayd signing off.
Morning Ahmed
ReplyDeleteI thought that was a good recount of the fale launch, you had information about what we did and who was in involved as well as when it was. I took me back to marching around area 1 chanting really loud..
Remember that names have capital letters; so Kauri, Kowhai, Rata and Totara would as they are names of our fales. Keep up the blogging :)